Friday, December 19, 2008
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Just finished writing this song, hope you get what it means ^^
enjoy reading
~here goes (with guitar)~
My Unfinished Heart
1st
If now I could without the words,
Describe the pain, the sorrow, the hurts,
That bring me down lower than dirt
Then that I shall though ignored, not heard
If now I could without the words,
Describe the pain, the sorrow, the hurts,
That bring me down lower than dirt
Then that I shall though ignored, not heard
2nd
Within the noises that drown my voice
That label on all I own, a price
Above the things that force my choice
To turn my heart as cold as ice
Within the noises that drown my voice
That label on all I own, a price
Above the things that force my choice
To turn my heart as cold as ice
Bridge
I’m sorry because perfect I’m not
But for you I tried and hard I fought
Till the last breath, only you I thought
I was close but I now know not
I’m sorry because perfect I’m not
But for you I tried and hard I fought
Till the last breath, only you I thought
I was close but I now know not
Chorus
The complete side of my other part
The feeling of us at a brand new start
The fairy tail ending from me depart
The complete picture of my broken heart
The complete side of my other part
The feeling of us at a brand new start
The fairy tail ending from me depart
The complete picture of my broken heart
repeats 1st, 2nd
Chorus
The complete side of my other part
The feeling of us at a brand new start
The fairy tail ending from me depart
The complete picture of my unfinished heart
The feeling of us at a brand new start
The fairy tail ending from me depart
The complete picture of my unfinished heart
~END~
...tadaa...
what d'ya think ? :)
oh and ps-'some people' you better be contented lolx
;p
10 comments:
yay! finally got the comments section to work.. thank God.. the template html almost made me 'peng' trying to do this lolx
luckily my heart still with me, not yet finish...LOL
'some people' appreciates this, but, still dont really get it, 'some people' understands the lyrics well, but dont get how it relates to the author..author pls explain to 'some people'...
'some people' also thinks that something is missing leh..nidta have sth like dis http://asmallgurl.blogspot.com/2008/06/just-for-b-r-b-i-e.html mah
sing n play den post :P
dun peng 1st... gt ure encoded... MerrY ChrisTmaS~~
dude... nice man...
now u are my sifu when it comes to for i am also plannin to write a gay song....
plz show me the way, master (fake bows)
lolz :P
lolZ thank you this really means alot!! I elaborate in my next post! hehe ur the stars of it!! ^^
mello Mello mello who art thou? ^^
dreamy Alan, check again lo.. I think 'someone' has it now lolz
meimei,
play, sing, post... O.O easy to say hard to do huhu
ash,
weh I read yours.. soo a shee wey lolx
joshua!!! omigosh!! the lyrics of the song are just amazing!!
u hav d song?? recorded??
can i listen to it??
the lyrics are just..OMG!!
i love it...
lolz not yet fully recorded this song yet haha, I can play the 'famalee' in swinny ^^
thankyou for the so very kind words haha
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